I had a harder time writing this poem.  I have a good idea and this is my start.  I think I still need to work on it.

Garden Rainbow
Butterflies are like tiny rainbows
that come with the breeze
showing their colors
and in the blink of an eye
they are gone.
Jenny
4/8/2010 01:56:04 am

Claire,

Like flowers in Spring
Your poems unfurl themselves
showing their promise

:) See, you're an inspiration! Keep up the good work!!

Auntie Jenny

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Garret
4/13/2010 12:36:57 pm

I like the start of your poem. It is hard to come up with poems all the time--you are doing a great job!

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Angie
4/19/2010 04:22:36 pm

Your poem reminds me of something Piglet would write! Except he would probably call it "flutterby" instead of "butterfly." :)

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